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Wednesday, October 04, 2006

My Pets


My dog's name is Queen. She is a puppy who likes to eat.
Sometimes she eats and drinks too fast and gets sick.
Queen has a sister named Princess.
Princess looks like a skunk, and she never get's sick.
My puppies make me happy.

By: H. Powell 3rd Grade

5 Comments:

  • I liked:

    -the fact that it's cute!

    I wondered:

    -what are the little balls above the water?

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:29 PM  

  • I liked:

    -your beautiful picture!

    I wondered:

    -what the spots were on the picture

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:29 PM  

  • I liked:

    -how your dogs' names are unique

    I wondered:

    -how do your puppies make you happy?

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:30 PM  

  • I liked:

    -I thought it was really funny and cute!

    I wondered:

    -why do your puppies make you happy?

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:31 PM  

  • I loved it! I thought your description of Princess was great (I can really picture this dog that looks like a skunk!). My cats sometimes get sick after they eat, so I thought the picture was very realistic. Good job!

    By Blogger Ryan, at 1:37 PM  

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