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Tuesday, September 19, 2006

News story about First week of school

When school started it was very fun .we told about our summer and had a test about our selves. We went over our nifty fifty. We all ways go over rule number 20 that is part of our nifty fifty. It took us two hours to go over our nifty fifty. Then we were dun. The nifty fifty is our class rules we only have 4 kids in our school.

--J. Crout, 3rd Grade

posted by Ryan at 10:30 AM

4 Comments:

  • What I think could be better:

    What is rule number 20, and why do you go over it so long?

    What is the nifty fifty?

    What I liked:

    I liked how honest you were.

    The writing is very good! You gave good details - keep it up!

    A. Clements, 6th Grade

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 11:19 AM  

  • What I think could be better:

    I want to hear all of your summer stuff - what every student did.

    What I liked:

    I liked that you said school was fun. How was it fun?

    H. Powell, 2nd Grade

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 11:24 AM  

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    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 11:33 AM  

  • Things i liked:

    Good use of detail.

    The writting is good.

    Things I want to know:

    What is nifty fifty?

    What is rule number twenty

    A. DeWitt 8th grade

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 11:37 AM  

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